Is this good?? LADIES tell me what you think?

there is this girl I like and she likes me but she is holding back because she is recently out of a divorce and i;m out of long term relationship my self...so we are not rushing into anything ....just good friends for now

I want to send here a message for v-day where I dont confess love or ask her to be my valentine ...I dont want to be pushy but I do not want just sit back and do nothing

so here is what I had in mind



"not sure what to say

today is a fine day

hope I'm not over the line

but I'm glad you a friend of mine

have a splendid v-day ~hugs~"



would you add something else to it?



and dont slam me because I;m sending a txt message

I'm a busy person and I'm out of town constantly ....even this entire week....and ordering flowers or sending gift would be to over the top

besides we txt each other a lot so i think its not in bad taste

Is this good?? LADIES tell me what you think?
It's nice.

But I think you can do better. The rest of your question is mature, well written and well thought out, but the poem seems juvenile in comparison.
Reply:i wouldnt change a thing! =]
Reply:dude, in the words of Chris Tucker make sure u don't land in the friend zone.
Reply:be honest
Reply:Sweet and short! I like it-
Reply:sniff sniff that is soo sweet you make me want to cry. I think that is a super sweet thing to say you will make her very happy.
Reply:i think its cute i would send it
Reply:I think if you already txt alot it wouldnt look like you want to rush into anything, which you dont, if I just read that corectly. Maybe you should leave out "Not sure what to say". It sounds like your trying to hard. Hope I helped!
Reply:Sounds perfect, but if you want her to know your interested you might want to be a little more aggressive.
Reply:Hey guy, if YOU like it and see it as an ok thing, then go for it...... I got a smile out of it and she will too.... maybe send a pic. over the phone, if ya can, of a little puppy or kitty...... she will get a giggle out of that......... God bless
Reply:I think she'll appreciate the thot. Go for it!
Reply:You should let her know that you will be thinking of her and every time she sees a red heart it will be a reminder that you are thinking of her!
Reply:sounds mighty friendly..if you LIKE her..you may want to say something MORE..just my opinion.
Reply:I'd get rid of the over the line part it just seems weird otherwise it's good for a text
Reply:Through my gf:



If you want it to turn into something more in the future you can do something like-- "You are such a beautiful wonderful woman. I can't begin to tell you how much to mean to me. I am so happy that I have you in my life."



Or just friends-- "Thank you for being such an exceptional person for all these (months, years, etc) My life is so much better having a friend like you in it"



Use the kiss method: Keep It Simple Stupid! Good luck!