Love poem with a "secret message"?

Is this Valentine's poem any good?

Make sure to see the "secret message" in the first letter of each line:



Beautiful Becca Wise



Beauty surrounds your sweet name, Becca Wise,

Even the Angels agree.

Causing the flowers to hate and despise.

Come, won’t you say you love me?



After the sun has gone down past the trees

Why not come visit some time?

I’ll take your hand and we’ll go to the seas,

Searching for something we both want to find.



Echoing laughter, I’ll call out your name;

I’ll come to you and together we’ll be.

Lightly the waves crash, the sand stays the same;

Open new doors unto me.



Voices of beauty, we’ll sing together

Eternal in harmony.

Youth will give strength to reach our endeavor.

One goal and one love simultaneously.



Until you are mine I will pass the time

Trying to win your sweet love.

Often I’ll think of your smile sublime;

Only a kiss will bring what I dream of.

Love poem with a "secret message"?
hell yeah!!!she got the message!!!of your poem she feels your love!!!!of how super sweet that poem is she'll kiss you..
Reply:Sweet. I got it ;) ..even tho I'm not Becca.
Reply:ITS AWESOME!!!!!!!!! lol didnt get the mssg at first hahahaha
Reply:I think she'll love it ;-)



well done
Reply:thats good....