Is it good?

Tell me if you think these poems are good:



The Moon



The moon is shining

Brightly in the night

Only whispers of darkness fright.

Stars make dots

Lining the sky

Then the moon kisses darkness good-bye.

It tells the flowers the message

The stars too

There is also a message

For me and you.

From sadness and mourning…

The message…

Good Morning!



here is the second one:



My Best Friend





Sharing moments.

Sharing tears.

Remembering memories

Of the past years.

Saving each other from doing crimes.

Always there during hard times.

I hope the time will never end.

The time I have with my best friend.











































Type what you think

Is it good?
They have potential, you have talent but they seem very teenage diary.



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Reply:the 1st poem
Reply:WOW. Beautiful writing. I wish I could write like that. LOL.
Reply:I have seen better.



Coach
Reply:the first peom i liked how you used the expressions of the moon
Reply:Sigh......NO
Reply:I liked both of them! They both flow well. Plus they both have good ideas to them. Great job!
Reply:I think those poems are awesome!! I would've never been able to write something that good!!
Reply:I like the first one a lot. It is very pretty.
Reply:Not bad!! A bit on the amature side, but keep at it and I'm sure you'll be an excellent writer one day!
Reply:What grade are you in?