Thursday, January 26, 2012

I need to write a figurative language poem..plz help with suggestions?

i have to write a poem using either metaphors, similes or personification. i chose the topic Wisdom



this is what i have so far:



Where does wisdom sprout from?



Does it bloom

like a flower on a crystal clear day?





i need about 8 more lines.. any suggestions plz!!!

I need to write a figurative language poem..plz help with suggestions?
Where does wisdom sprout from?



Does it bloom, like a flower on a crystal clear day?



Or does it appear like a cloud and as we walk on, it dissapears?



Or perhaps, it is like the ran, tapping on our shoulder, reminding us everyday is a clean slate?



Wisdom is my desire of life, like my heart beating to finally hear the words, I love you.



All knowing is the same as knowing it all, or is it? It will always be a mystery like how the dew appears in the spring mornings.



Sapience is a way some people find closure. To know what happened is the same as feeling the heart beat of the person you missed so much.



Wisdom is supernatural, and it will always be magical, but more than that, it will be love.
Reply:...or is a root that burrows deep beneath our surface only exposing hints of its existance once our outermost layers are worn away.



just trying to flow witht the whole nature theme.

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Reply:maybe you should keep eluding to other theories (facts) of where wisdom reallly does come form. which is of course experience, and learning. or one could say time.





Just as a dandelion growing

releasing its seeds,

To bare patches of soil, spreading itself away.



To share such a gift as the seeds of knowledge,

History...

Shall never fade


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