Thursday, January 26, 2012

Why don't you read my poems anymore?

Why don't you read my poems anymore?

I really value your opinion.

Why the suspicious suspension?

Unnecessary tension.

I feel like such a bore.



When will you read my poetry again?

Just pour over every word.

Each adjective and verb.

My thoughts go undisturbed,

Like a flower in the rain.



Someone, please read my poetry again.

If not a lot, just a little.

If not a cup, then a dribble.

Beginning, end, or the middle.

Just read one line again.

Why don't you read my poems anymore?
Your poetic form is not my cup of tea! Sorry!!
Reply:I love your poems and am overjoyed when I see that you've shared another one with the world! I used to read all of your poems but times are tough at the moment for a teen like me and I sometimes don't have time to see all the beautiful work that you've done! But I know that things will get better they always do, and I can come back to reading all the wonderful messages you share through poetry!
Reply:Sorry Semp, while I don't respond like I should, your poetry is always read,and I do find a message in it. If not for me,for someone. Expample, while I was back in Pittsburg, I read the one on Hate, and it came in handy for my uncle and his girlfriend whom encountered some "Mountain hospitality" while at an outing. Don't be mad bro, I will be more on point.
Reply:Well,Semper Fi!

I'm so very Glad you shared with me.

This is my first "intro" you see............

Into your life of poetry.

Your suspension and suspicion is suspect to me.



Why, Oh Why! Do they do these things to me....

As my eyes dim...I'll try not to be grim...

For Semper Fi, dearest...I search Q%26amp;A for Thy poetry!

I have missed your poetry from the start!...

I know I should have been on the mark!

May the light of the Lord Illuminate in all thy

work and deed.

And be there for you in need!!!

Forevermore, forevermore, forever more.................................
Reply:Not always that I dont read them, but get so much mail that at times I cant get to half of what I want to get to. As of this week, I made an annoucntment to my contacts, and I notice others are doing it too. That tho God has a sense of humor, and so are we, we must request that all the silly jokes in e mail come to a halt, and to stop answering the silly questions on Yahoo , so we have time for the things that God does call us too.

You keep writing, I keep reading.

I encourage you to keep wrting.

God bless you.

Forgive me for when I dont have time to respond to all that comes to me.

God will bless you.

SFCU

Sister Shirley
Reply:Semper Fi i always enjoy reading your poetry and love it all.With the trolls and all my violations i took sometime off but i have been reading one or two.. I got a break so now i am ready for round 3# so i am glad to be back and getting to read your poems again..Bless you my friend Semper.Fi.
Reply:Nice one brother nice, i loved the way it flowed, i've been writing for 12 years now and i doubt that i could get this subject to flow so well, wicked good job
Reply:Where did you find "suspicious suspension?" Alliteration time there! You have covered the gamut here. My question is who would dare to not read you verses? Must be an Army guy! Enjoyed the read, maybe we give the guy 30 seconds to start!
Reply:I try to read each and every one. but my time is rather limited.

So much to do, so little time. Your work is and always has been so inspiring...you have given smiles and tears to my days...for which I salute you!



Flowers...as always!
Reply:I always read your poems brother....but I don't always leave you answers because I'd just end up saying the same old thing over and over. LOL



As usual, it's a great poem! I like all your poems. :))



((((((((SF))))))))
Reply:You've got talent, brother. Can you please write a poem for me, from the little that you know about me? I promise you I will treasure it!
Reply:i read all your poems.....they are all amazing, i wish you would put them in a book and publish them. i want an autgraphed copy. then i can say, thats my friend...and now he's a famous poet!!!!!
Reply:Just did.

Not bad

Rather good

Don't be sad.



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please read mine

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Reply:I do, my dear,

Read word for word,

Your poetry compose.

But time and work

Beg me abide

An answer to dispose.





Have a poetic day!
Reply:Wow! Beautiful. :)
Reply:I read your poems Semper. And this is a good one.
Reply:Okay big guy, I read this one just for you - but don't push it... Pretty good!
Reply:Just read your Bio. This has got to be a poem and not a serious question???



Robert
Reply:I read 'em; I just don't always leave feedback behind. But I always enjoyed your publish worthy stuff! :-)
Reply:I read all your poems and love them!
Reply:Precious - please know that I DO read them... and appreciate them.



Peace.
Reply:(((Semper))) I love you %26amp; your poetry.



God Bless You.
Reply:I just did. It was great, Semper. :)
Reply:I just did
Reply:Very interesting, do u mean this literally, or is it just a poem? I like it.
Reply:We all need to be heard

Our voice

Our cry to be noted



The verse seeks to be spoken

The Poets craft the written word

Just a simple token of respect



~OM~

SFCU


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