Wednesday, February 1, 2012

The intention and ideas behind these lines....??

Seems lovely but I don't know what it's about...



"If you unravel this phrase blood will pour out of it.



Get smooth and sooth this curled eyebrow, it hurts.

I pray to my physical body to give me afterlife,

And physical body sais "Thou Shall Not Kill".



But perfection doesn't wait to see.

The fingers say a song I am too wasted to sing,

The lyrical lines in my head bow to thee,

The written and spoken words have a long lifespan from me,

But the cells are dying out from the light that gives.



Given that, I leave this for eternity.

One other vivacious carrier for thee,

One burden for this self-destructive flesh to flee.

One who is so aware of what it was, wants to settle what shall be,

Longs to feel the pain but just cannot breathe.



Illusion is the thing.

Make me weary of thee at least I ask.

Then dump me, mere piece of mortality,

Like I dumped the fish and flowers I ate.

You don't need to know I am not me and you are not us."

The intention and ideas behind these lines....??
The metaphysical torment before the Unknown and Mortality, human clinging to ephemere life before extinction.

Exquisite poem. Who dunnit??
Reply:Guy/Gal wants to kill themselves because life sucks, but his/her body is saying don't do it, because it will cease to exist and there will only be spirit. Person needs some serious therapy.
Reply:I am not me, I am you, but.... Are you me?



Only a deaf messenger can hear these words.


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