Girls, women, ladies....help me out here?

there is this girl I like and she likes me but she is holding back because she is recently out of a divorce and i;m out of long term relationship my self...so we are not rushing into anything ....just good friends for now

I want to send here a message for v-day where I dont confess love or ask her to be my valentine ...I dont want to be pushy but I do not want just sit back and do nothing

so here is what I had in mind



"not sure what to say

today is a fine day

hope I'm not over the line

but I'm glad you a friend of mine

have a splendid v-day ~hugs~"



would you add something else to it?



and dont slam me because I;m sending a txt message

I'm a busy person and I'm out of town constantly ....even this entire week....and ordering flowers or sending gift would be to over the top

besides we txt each other a lot so i think its not in bad taste

Girls, women, ladies....help me out here?
It doesn't sound pushy at all. It's actually kinda sweet. It just might be the thing to brighten her day.
Reply:yea that poem seems fine and not pushy at all... i would try maybe something that doesnt express that your trying to not be pushy "to over the line,..." and maybe something that shows how you want to remain friends ALWAYS to get your feelings int he picture
Reply:i think its great no i would not change anything,and you have a splendid v-day as well
Reply:b clear in ur question
Reply:txting is OK but the whole rhyming thing is so lame sounds like something off of a cereal box or something
Reply:I THINK THE POEM IS GOOD THE WAY IT IS,I WOULD'NT CHANGE A THING!YOU NOT BEING PUSHY AT ALL.IM SURE IT WILL BRING A SMILE TO HER FACE!



GOOD LUCK
Reply:I think the peom is fine.