Help me with my poems?

im writing a free verse poem:



i see a little red house

red as a fire truck.

i see the flowers in the front

so pretty and pink.

i see windows

and i wonder what lays behind them.

i see the green grass

and i want to walk on it.



can someone help with an ending line and feel free to edit it?

Help me with my poems?
I see a white picket fence

that keeps the secrets in

and the intruders out

It confounds my ever strong

curiosities
Reply:i see a little red house

red as a fire truck.

i see the flowers in the front

so pretty and pink.

****i see bright open windows

and i wonder what lays behind them.

i see the green grass

and i want to walk on it.



And so I walk on the green grass

And look in the bright windows

And I smell the pretty pink flowers

And enter the red house

And I am content





What I've done is firstly even out the pacing of line 5 and then just used the stage you set as actions. I used them in reverse order as a device to stitch together your setup with the conclusion.



My take on it and you should feel free to ignore all or part at your discretion.