Monday, January 30, 2012

I need help with a haiku poem!!! (i dont want a good luck or a do this your self i want the answer please)?

ok these are the directions:











Haiku is a japanese poetry that has seventeen syllables and just 3 lines. Its is a short peom that capures a poem in nature.











Line 1: Five syllables







Line 2: seven syllables







line 3:five syllables







ex



a bitter morning



sparrows sitting together



without any necks







notice it dosent rhyme





write three haiku poems about one aspect of nature. for example, you could write about the weather ,flowers,seasons,animals ect.

I need help with a haiku poem!!! (i dont want a good luck or a do this your self i want the answer please)?
Haiku poems are usually about nature, which is why the assignment was given. Poetry.com has a haiku section where you can make a poem from the words given and submit it to win a prize. It's pretty easy.



No, the poem doesn't always rhyme, but it says something powerful. Notice in your oem that it is a "bitter morning" and the sparrows are sitting "together" and "without any necks." Can you feel how the birds are so cold that they sit close and bury their heads in their feathers to keep warm?



I'll give you an idea ... and you can think about what to write. The other day I was driving into a city from my tiny country community. I saw a hawk perched on a fence post. At first I thought it was a statue, until he turned his head. He appeared stately in his fashion, uncaring about the world passing by. He turned his head to look at me and seemed very bored. I thought about stopping to take a picture, but was afraid he would just fly away. So I went on my way and left him to do what stately hawks do in the afternoon.



You might think of that image and try to write something on it if you wish.



Good Luck!

Sue
Reply:The lightning strikes the man

his flesh is fried and crispy

he is quite tasty
Reply:1. TRY IT YOURSELF

here is one:

The moon shines brightly

Sun pounds fiercly on my back

Beautiful daylight

I wrote that so u BETTER not plagarize it
Reply:it is morning time



the birds will fly far away



far away



( i know its cheesy )
Reply:Pining in the rain

Blustery drizzle and sleet.

Chill wind says "alone".



Twenty two degrees

Miles from Tokyo soba shop

Ice on whisper pond.





Damp green moss like sponge.

Soaking up my troubled mind

Blooms return in peace.



All alone I sit

Shamed because I stole the verse

Never having tried.



Here are some examples for you.

But give it a go. You can write haiku too.

Write down a list of all the nature and weather words you can think of, then string them together in a haiku thought.

It's like a puzzle.

You can do it.
Reply:Billowing grey clouds

Shapes appear and disapper

With no beginning or end
Reply:Silly little girl

Can not do her own homework

So she goes online



I am in a great mood so why not. I'll do your homeowrk for you:



Roses that are red

Show your spuse that you love her

Yellow is for friends



As the thunder rolls

And lighting fills the whole sky

I feel oh so scared



The beautiful deer

Startes drinking next to the lake

the hunter takes aim
Reply:the eagle soars high

in a solo quest for food

do your own homework
Reply:the gorilla walks

swiftly through the springtime rain

his junk is floppy
Reply:too had that he's dead

he really was with nature

we will miss him now





you should do your work

nobody likes you right now

too bad you are dumb





i am tired of this

you should go to bed right now

let the people sleep
Reply:A little bunny

Searching for the soft green grass

Eating, Eating, GO!



My daughter done this last year in 5th grade. You really should do your own homework though.


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