I need help! GRAMMER?

Okay so for school, im making a poem about a dieing flower ...the first line is personification...second line is a simlie and the third line is supposed to be a metaphore but i CANT THINK OF ONE!



1 (PERSONIFICATIN) : As the stem tilted and the leaves fell off, the flower got sadder and sadder



2: (SIMILIE) It felt as if hope for it was going down the ladder



3: (METAPHOR) ????I NEED HELP?????



ps.. it has to rhyme with ladder and sadder (adder)

I need help! GRAMMER?
first of all if you dont know what a metaphor is its a type of personification without the use of like or and or any other conjunction. an example would be: "the blue drangonfly flew across the lake, a brilliant blue jewel in the rough", now thats just an example. Now as for you metaphor in your poem I have a couple of suggestions:

- "it withered down to its last inch of life, a breath of air getting flatter and flatter."



- "it coiled up and emotions brewed, a bull getting madder and madder"



personally i prefer the first one the best. and still if you like none of my suggestions you can always find words that rhyme with sadder, ladder...etc with the given link



http://www.rhymezone.com/r/rhyme.cgi?Wor...



im sorry, you have to copy and paste that in ur url bar, i suck at doing this computer stuff, english is more of my style, as you can tell:p



Good Luck!!
Reply:Well Shadder rhymes with all of those words but i can't put it into a metaphor the flower was going to shatter as if a ............. can't think of anything that's the best i can do !!!!
Reply:The flower was an airless balloon which got badder.
Reply:madder, flatter, batter, chatter
Reply:you could use fdm215 but that is a similie.
Reply:But I won't be so flatter that my flower is a dying piece of art.
Reply:seeing the blood drip down made me madder and madder

for its life worth living had drained in the gutter
Reply:Her words were poisonous like the bite of an adder