Feedback on my poem pleaseee?

beauty lies beneath

a green leaf

sores in the blue sky

the golden sun will never deny

happiness to flow

across your mind

beautful glow

perfectly lined

flowers casade around

amazingly tall trees

high above the ground

hope for this to never cease

as the coulds seem

to create your most prized dream

Feedback on my poem pleaseee?
beautiful. I love it.
Reply:It's good. The language is very deep and it's obvious there's a good amount of thought in it. However, it could use some punctuation so it does not sound all blobbed together.
Reply:makes me think...
Reply:You need to develop some reading habit .

You need to have punctuation and rhyming patterns.You have got a good head read some books on philosophy.you are certain to succeed.

I would recommend you to read Rabrinath Tagore,Ben Jonson and William Blake.
Reply:Well, I like some of the ideas you have presented here, though the rhyming pattern is off. Try writing in stanza's this may help further develope the style you are attempting.
Reply:I like it. It is uplifting and touching that part of me that wants to be in nature with an attitude of gratitude for all of life.